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I'll take my life once every day if that gets through to you.
I'll take my life in every way if that shows I love you.
I'll carve myself into that shape if it's perfect for you.
I'll carve myself just how you say if that keeps me with you.
I'll let you mold me like wet clay if that means me and you.
I'll let you mold my dreams each day to make them right for you.
I'll let you throw my life away so I may stay with you.
I'll let you throw my mind away.
I'll do it all for you.
Dear Grandfather,

I can make my own life decisions. I don't care what you think. So do you mind not talking to my boyfriend about "what's best for me"? Because honestly you don't know crap. I literally talk to nobody about anything, and I don't talk to you. Sorry, but you know this. So you can't say what's best for me when you don't know crap about me. So stop. Because you're making this so much worse than you think.

Also, mom, that was a jerk move. I specifically asked you not to tell anyone about our conversation and you went and told THE ENTIRE FAMILY. You're not allowed to ask me why I never tell you crap. Because you go and tell the world and it all ends up falling apart. So yeah I'm beyond ticked at you for telling me crap. Like the one time I trusted you with something and figured you'd help you went and ruined EVERYTHING. Thank you. Glad to know my family is ganging up on me one relative at a time. I'm done. 
  • Mood: Outraged
My two most common lines:
I'm sorry and I love you.
They sit upon my tongue
And wait for me to give the cue.
The first I say too often,
And I'm sorry that I do,
But the other is sincere,
Offered only unto you.
I tell you I'd give everything
For your happiness to be,
And I mean I'd give up anything
To show you love from me.
I know that it's not money,
Or a 20 karat ring,
But these are my thoughts and words,
And they are important things.
I'll share them with you always
Which is something new to me,
But this is just the best way
To show you love from me.
My thoughts and words are everything,
And I'm sending them to you,
I know it's close to nothing
But they show I do love you.
As a Poet
As poets and authors words are our lives. They're what we give to those we love. 

Please please please tell me what yall think. It'd be much appreciated. 
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The Grumpy one (Grump)
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Life gave me lemons and I made lemonade, and I have finally found the sugar.
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Dear Grandfather,

I can make my own life decisions. I don't care what you think. So do you mind not talking to my boyfriend about "what's best for me"? Because honestly you don't know crap. I literally talk to nobody about anything, and I don't talk to you. Sorry, but you know this. So you can't say what's best for me when you don't know crap about me. So stop. Because you're making this so much worse than you think.

Also, mom, that was a jerk move. I specifically asked you not to tell anyone about our conversation and you went and told THE ENTIRE FAMILY. You're not allowed to ask me why I never tell you crap. Because you go and tell the world and it all ends up falling apart. So yeah I'm beyond ticked at you for telling me crap. Like the one time I trusted you with something and figured you'd help you went and ruined EVERYTHING. Thank you. Glad to know my family is ganging up on me one relative at a time. I'm done. 
  • Mood: Outraged

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Ty for the +favSnoopy by Digithalie
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Thank you for the fav :3
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Thankies for the fave Hug 
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Thank you for the fave on Shadow!
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Thanks for the favorite *belated* Hahaha!!!
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Shane13126 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
very nice writings :)
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Thank you very much!!
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